There's a few full length shots on here ( image allowance permitting) to show off my body type etc, and I do mainly work more on creative shoots, genuinely think its my hair as to why its mostly offered :l Im a little concerned about it coming off as a photographers port however Could you expand a little bit more on that @marlhamphoto? I definitely lack in lingerie, I've had trouble finding a preferred photographer for that level, as in I'm commonly contacted by those who actually want nude or glamour and genuinely aren't respectful to my levels :/ Ill try and mix lingerie in with the bath shoot, the idea was sheer clothing anyway but i know its something that is missing from my port. And thankyou Colin Any suggestions are welcome
There's a difference between constructive critism and being downright rude, that's not exactly helpful to anyone is it? There's a mix of views on here, obviously dependant to your own tastes. I'm currently in the stages of booking a few lingerie shoots now so hopefully that will give my port a bit more variety. I just hope people don't get the wrong idea and approach me for that little bit more! Thankyou guys, most of this has been helpful!marlhamphotoWhat makes you think the images are creative - the addition of smoke and distracting editing effects? The most important part of the image on sites like this is you, the model. That's what cuts the mustard and no amount of 'artistic' or 'creative' effects are going to make up for any inadequacies in your modelling - or, more precisely, the photographer's inability to coax decent modelling from you or to shoot the style of photos needed in a model's port or to provide a suitable level of editing.
I think it would be good to do something a bit more muted down, there are other images that are less in my full portfolio on other sites,I understand the college feel, I keep scanning through and there just seems to be too much going on!profilepicturesI'm thinking your intentions are good, and you do say you've a real interest in art. I struggle a bit with a feeling of a college portfolio, slightly heavy with college type photography. Smoke bombs are fun, but not an end in themselves. It'd be good to see your creativity bent out of shape a bit by someone else with a little experience and a different outlook.
There's a difference between constructive critism and being downright rude, that's not exactly helpful to anyone is it?
Discarded, not a problem, But in future I'd respect you much more to consistently constructively critique me, your last post is much more helpful, so thank you for that.