I would like to see a close face shot without too much makeup added to complete a basic set that shows figure and face other wise as a starter portfolio for those after doing basic glamour shots its fine.
If you are looking to do it more seriously I would then sit down and have a think what work you are really after. I see the usual list of ticking everything that fits you levels but not the matching images. All we have is generic standing around in various states of undress shots with no real posing or indication of what you are capable of when pushed by an experienced photographer.
For example if you really want to focus on lingerie and glamour go out and buy some good quality well fitting underwear just for shoots. Then find a photographer within range who can shoot that style well along with a MUA and see if you can arrange a session that puts some serious images on your portfolio. Once you have that nailed then look at the next area. You don't need loads. You can always send further samples if needed. It is nice to know you can pull the right poses and bring the right outfits for a particular genre tough
I'd have to agree with redbaron above. Quite a lot of standing about going on, little emotion or expressive posing.
I'd suggest you do what all the better models seem to do, find someone who's work is really excellent in the style you'd like to work. Pay or tf with them to get the best from your pictures and use these to attract work. At the same time you'll hopefully be pushed to pose at your best, and decide if you're any good at modelling.
Good models seem to work smart, they recognise paid work is always the photographers set,style and direction so isn't always going to show them at their very best, hence they collaborate smart or invest a few quid in their portfolio.
But expressions/posing/modelling are a bit weak. Too many lacklustre hand-on-head shots which are usually indicative of a model who runs out of steam in her posing - they're the kind of poses models resort to when they're struggling. And you need to project more engagement through mood and expression IMO.
As commented above - you need more and better experience which I'm sure will come - photographers who demand more of you but support you at the same time.