So I've been away for a while...

So I've been away for a while...

9 posts
10 Dec 2014
And I've just re-discovered Purestorm and updated my port Please take a look (I've been a busy bee the last few months ) Any feedback would be very much appreciated! Rosie
Posted 10 Dec 2014
Bob
Photographer
Bob
Your portfolio does precisely  what it says on the tin.
Not a lot more to say really.
Bob
Posted 10 Dec 2014
marlhamphoto
Photographer
marlhamphoto
Personally I prefer this to anything in your port here (not that there's anything awful about it!):



But that's just me
Posted 10 Dec 2014
Edited by marlhamphoto 10 Dec 2014
Thanks so much both. I love that image too Marl as it's so different to my usual work. A lot of my followers on social media seem less keen though, hence why I left it off. I may add it now though Thanks again, and keep it coming
Posted 10 Dec 2014
Oh...and a suggestion as to the weakest image on my port at the moment I could swop this with would be fab

Posted 10 Dec 2014
marlhamphoto
Photographer
marlhamphoto
I'm not going to make it that easy for you lol.

Any one of these three I reckon:



Strained wrists and wrinkly hands, also the whole effect looks a little 'pained'. Dead eyes and confused lighting.



I don't 'get' what's happening with your arms. And your right elbow and forearm represent the broadest, brightest part of the image which is hard to see past.



This certainly gives the impression that you're up to no good - but I'm not sure what I'm supposed to read into it beyond that. Something more alluring with the mood and the coat would have worked better for me.

But see what other people say. My tastes are often contrary to the norm.

Posted 10 Dec 2014
Edited by marlhamphoto 10 Dec 2014
Thanks Marl, it narrows it down It's so hard to be objective with your own pics, and like you said people's opinions can vary so much so it's nice to have some specific guidance(Oh and I have always hated my hand in the first one haha)Any other opinions are also welcome
Posted 10 Dec 2014
profilepictures
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profilepictu..
I like the b&w Marlham mentioned too, you've a good face and I could imagine you in pictures pretty easily. I think you've all sorts of potential, but the port is a bit brief so far.

Posted 11 Dec 2014
Thanks profilepictures Most of my portfolio is absent as I haven't decided on whether to upgrade as of yet. I've been modelling for about 9 months now so I've got a fair few images... I just find it hard to decide which images to include. Any advice on how to make the most of the 10 image limit? Would a wider range of images (showing different styles etc.) show off my potential better?
Posted 11 Dec 2014
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