New images now up!!

New images now up!!

6 posts
11 Sep 2014
[ Moved to Portfolio Review section and merged ]

Hi guys ive just uploaded some new images take a look and let me know your thoughts !

Thanks Gemma!
Posted 11 Sep 2014
Edited by Love 11 Sep 2014
[ Moved to Portfolio Review section and merged ]

Hi guys ive just uploaded some new images take a look and let me know your thoughts !

Thanks Gemma!
Posted 11 Sep 2014
Edited by Love 11 Sep 2014
StNeots
Photographer
StNeots
Should this not be in portfolio review instead of photography chat?
They are not your photos as far as photography technique goes so comments on this would not be in order.
Posted 11 Sep 2014
marlhamphoto
Photographer
marlhamphoto
OK, my thoughts are:

1. I don't like the processing (in particular the skin) in the Divine Boudoir images. A lot of smoothing/blur has been applied which IMO is never good to see in a model's portfolio.

2. The Malt Marsh images are OK. BUT - they're a bit formulaic - rule of thirds, very posed, very smiley. Fine if you like that sort of thing but for me something less contrived and with a more compelling narrative would be much more attractive.

That's not to say the images are bad - they're not - just giving you a hint as to what I think you could aim for in future.

Good luck
Posted 11 Sep 2014
Socialdisaster
Photographer
Socialdisast..
The mid-thigh water cut off is very, very unflattering.

The Divine image is horribly overworked.

You are squinting in all the shots, not good. There's another photo you have with eyes open, very nice.

Posted 11 Sep 2014
profilepictures
Photographer
profilepictu..
Agree as above, leaving a positive in that I think your best work is yet to come. Good face and figure, you just need a good photographer to work with.

Posted 12 Sep 2014
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