1. I don't like the processing (in particular the skin) in the Divine Boudoir images. A lot of smoothing/blur has been applied which IMO is never good to see in a model's portfolio.
2. The Malt Marsh images are OK. BUT - they're a bit formulaic - rule of thirds, very posed, very smiley. Fine if you like that sort of thing but for me something less contrived and with a more compelling narrative would be much more attractive.
That's not to say the images are bad - they're not - just giving you a hint as to what I think you could aim for in future.