Made a few changes and updated

Made a few changes and updated

7 posts
18 Dec 2013
GarethC
Photographer
GarethC
Made a few changes and updated my portfolio hope its an improvement let me know what you think

Posted 18 Dec 2013
GarethC
Photographer
GarethC
any constructive comments would be welcome

Posted 18 Dec 2013
Paul_Jones
Photographer
Paul_Jones
Well, I hope you think this constructive and not offensive. 

Nobody's skin is really that soft. I think the skin blurring takes ones attention away from the photography.






Best regards
Paul
Posted 18 Dec 2013
GarethC
Photographer
GarethC
thanks Paul point taken but not bad just those two out of them all

Posted 18 Dec 2013
Paul_Jones
Photographer
Paul_Jones
I was just using those two shots as examples.
You've used similar skin blurring on all her shots.

Posted 18 Dec 2013
GarethC
Photographer
GarethC
on her's yes because she has bad eczema but like her shots and still wanted to use them but good point tho

Posted 18 Dec 2013
profilepictures
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You might think about making the next steps with studio lighting, there's a real feel of it being just another person stood in front if your lights, so maybe tuition would fit?
I find the right crops, often excluding an elbow or two or a hand just feel cramped, given that almost all the poses are very static I think it makes for awkward compositions; you do tend to crop in too hard too often.
Lots of the portfolio is like a lingerie catalogue, handy in some limited circumstances but not a testament to your imagination or ability to direct an interesting situation.
I like the outdoor stuff a little better, go wide, go outside.

Posted 19 Dec 2013
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