Hi, you appear to have had a studio shoot and location shoot and updated images from both.
The very last image on your port I think shows you the best although I could be picky about the crop.
The thing that leaps out at me is the expression is the same on all the pictures. Maybe work on that in future shoots with the help of the photographer.
All of the shots are of a standard that we can see what you look like so they are a start. Are they exiting and draw you in, not really but then a lot of newbies pictures are appalling so you are in a better position already.
Now you have a start, think how you can up your game so after a few more shoots, you can see a dramatic improvement