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Made a few changes and updated

Gareth Clutton is off-lineGold Member
18 December 2013 08:03
GarethC
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GarethC
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United Kingdom
Wrexham
Wrexham

Made a few changes and updated my portfolio hope its an improvement let me know what you think


Gareth Clutton is off-lineGold Member
18 December 2013 16:31
GarethC
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GarethC
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United Kingdom
Wrexham
Wrexham

any constructive comments would be welcome


Paul Jones is off-line
18 December 2013 16:37
Paul_Jones
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Paul_Jones
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Lancashire
Wigan

Well, I hope you think this constructive and not offensive. 

Nobody's skin is really that soft. I think the skin blurring takes ones attention away from the photography.






Best regards
Paul
www.PaulJones.org (Glamour / Portraits / NSFW)


Gareth Clutton is off-lineGold Member
18 December 2013 16:46
GarethC
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GarethC
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United Kingdom
Wrexham
Wrexham

thanks Paul point taken but not bad just those two out of them all


Paul Jones is off-line
18 December 2013 16:50
Paul_Jones
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Paul_Jones
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Lancashire
Wigan

I was just using those two shots as examples.
You've used similar skin blurring on all her shots.

www.PaulJones.org (Glamour / Portraits / NSFW)


Gareth Clutton is off-lineGold Member
18 December 2013 17:02
GarethC
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GarethC
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United Kingdom
Wrexham
Wrexham

on her's yes because she has bad eczema but like her shots and still wanted to use them but good point tho


Profile Pictures is off-line
18 December 2013 23:28
profilepictures
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profilepictures
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Suffolk
Bury St Edmunds

You might think about making the next steps with studio lighting, there's a real feel of it being just another person stood in front if your lights, so maybe tuition would fit?
I find the right crops, often excluding an elbow or two or a hand just feel cramped, given that almost all the poses are very static I think it makes for awkward compositions; you do tend to crop in too hard too often.
Lots of the portfolio is like a lingerie catalogue, handy in some limited circumstances but not a testament to your imagination or ability to direct an interesting situation.
I like the outdoor stuff a little better, go wide, go outside.



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