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CAN SOMEONE REVIEW MY PROFILE PLEASE

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AmyLouise7 is off-line
03 July 2013 21:19
AFerdinand7
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Southport

Heeey guys! can I have some feedback please? I'm new to this site 
Dont hesitate!
Thanks
Amy x


Malc is off-lineSilver Member
04 July 2013 05:52
cziiki
Photographer
cziiki
Location
United Kingdom
London
London

What it shows, very nicely, is an extremely pretty face and the pics are engaging and fun and well executed. The only downside is you can't see much of your figure so people looking to book a model can't actually decide based on this port unless it's for headshots mainly.

The face painting could probably be cut down to one pic as though it shows one aspect of your modeling it's more about the artist and photographer than about the model. - though they are lovely as images and if you have a Tumblir or blogger they would go fine on there. And the port is to show your potential as a model to people seeking to hire you.

Still it's an attractive portfolio and you look great in all the pics.


King13 is off-lineSilver Member
07 July 2013 04:51
kingnorman13NK
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London


I suggest you need to think about images that will present you well for what you want to do. At the moment you have mostly head and shoulders shots which are not necessarily that informative. I can see a pretty face, but if considering you for say a lingerie or swimwear shot I would hesitate because no images illustrate your 'assets'. Try to get yourself some full length images which show your figure, skin etc.

NK


07 July 2013 04:55
Socialdisaster
Photographer


You are pretty, but that's not enough - your port doesn't sell you.
Modesty is just arrogance in stealth mode


Dave F is off-line
07 July 2013 10:49
looksphotography
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looksphotography
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United Kingdom
Merseyside
Wirral

Hi Amy,

I agree with all three comments so far, and would add in my opinion your profile should have at least a strong portrait image together with full length, and 3/4 length images showing your various styles / levels.

Good luck,   cheeky

Dave.


Bryony Edwards is off-lineSilver Member
07 July 2013 18:01
bryonyphotography
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bryonyphotography
Location
United Kingdom
Derbyshire
Mansfield

Your profile states that you have been publishedin vogue... If this is the case then you want to put a year sheet in your profile.


MERCMAN is off-line
08 July 2013 03:51
mercman
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mercman
Location
United Kingdom
Merseyside
Kirkby

Think you misread the Bio


Bryony Edwards is off-lineSilver Member
08 July 2013 17:06
bryonyphotography
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bryonyphotography
Location
United Kingdom
Derbyshire
Mansfield

Yeah, sorry, completely misread it.


GCImages is off-line
08 July 2013 17:40
GSC4X
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GSC4X
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United Kingdom
Gloucestershire
Gloucester

Its not a bad start - I would suggest clearer headshots as a priority.


Dominic Thurmer is off-linePlatinum Member
09 July 2013 12:50
dominicdgt
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dominicdgt
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Kent
Gillingham

Its rubbish, you should leave Purestorm now.



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