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 | 15 August 2012 04:22 |
| kayleigh90x Model  Location United Kingdom Derbyshire | Hey Added some new images... The ones the photgrapher chose to edit (i assume the ones he liked) but ive chosen a few to get edited but just want peoples advice/ criticism on these ones just now  Thanks Kayleigh P.s can't attach them on here as one phone at min - K x |
| 15 August 2012 04:32 |
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| Paul_Jones Photographer  Location United Kingdom Lancashire Wigan | When I look at a model's portfolio I want to see what she looks like and that she can emote in front of the camera. Of the new photos you've added, this one stands out as the best one for me:  I'm not so keen on this one purely because your face is obscured. It might be more suited to a photographer's portfolio than a model's:  On the whole you're making a good start :-) Best regards Paul |
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| 15 August 2012 04:55 |
| kayleigh90x Model Location United Kingdom Derbyshire | Thank you And yeah i think ur righy about the last one being suited to a photographers portfolio wait was the photographers choice rather than mine lol but just added it till I get some of the ones I have chosen. Thank you again Kayleigh x |
| 15 August 2012 04:57 |
| frankpht Photographer  Location United Kingdom London | Sorry to say but you're not coming over as a model more the girl next door. I don't know what it is nothing is jumping out and saying hey. Your main image is looking like you are either bored or not inspired by the photographer and I'm afraid your hair is a mess. It is one of your best attributes and you should be making the best of it. The picture with the seven comments has to go it's out of focus and again the hair is a mess. Yes you have nice eyes but better seen sharp. All the jeans image can go you could say it looks like a model on a day off. There is only one image that works and it's the one of you looking out over the railings. You're possibly to low in the frame but I like your look. The one with you looking away could be anyone so doesn't work for a port shot. The colour shot I call it the green shot (could be my monitor) is somewhat to green. The litter behind you is spoiling it. Which is a shame as the picture is growing on me. You do look confident and you hair is looking good. I do want to be positive but when you get 7 comments on a photo that is out of focus. That's not the way to go. Keep in there bring some more pizzazz to your look and brush the hair. I really don't want to post this felling a bit like S. Cowell. Wish I was if I had his money I'd be much more nicer to you. Sadly for me these images are not selling you and I'm sure you've got more to give. |
| 15 August 2012 05:15 |
| kayleigh90x Model Location United Kingdom Derbyshire | As i said previously, these arent the shots I like, the ones i have chosen to be edited I think are a lot better on the whole. But then again I could be wrong.. My hair does obviously get brushed and believe it ur not it did get brushed a few times on.shoot, but my hair as soon as its brushed ten mins later looks like a riot. I don't paticularly like the shot u are talking about, the green one but every one has different preferences. It's alright, I can handle criticism K x |
 | 15 August 2012 06:30 |
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| gerda_babbii Model  Location United Kingdom Norfolk Kings Lynn | This one I Love you look stunning and nice scene   the other one i like is you in a field you look rather pretty I think your port is rather basic but dont get put down if you get critisism just take it on the chin take the advice given and keep at it, you only joined a short time ago so no one can expect you to be the next kate moss lol your making a start and thats good just keep practising and with time you will start to notice yourself what is good and/or bad. When i first joined i uploaded every image good or bad and most of the time they were pretty  to be honest i still have many average shots in my own port and been doing it for over a year. You are pretty i would say find a tog to do some simple headshots in a studio so your hair and make up stays good through out the shoot (it can be annoying my hair is very soft so a slight bit of breeze and needs brushing every 2 mins lol) where as in a studio theres normally a mirror and somewhere to touch up on make up etc.. which is useful. Good Luck Look forward to seeing more of you x |
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| 15 August 2012 08:33 |
| kayleigh90x Model Location United Kingdom Derbyshire | Aww thank you I quite like that one too Criticism doesn't bother me, in thr long run, if its constructive, it will only help yeah it is basic and I know i need alot more variation in the different styles I want to do ie glamour, topless etc and with different hairstules, make up etc but ill get there  some of your images are FAB! But yeah thats what I'm doing thy because even if they aren't the greatest images they're better than none. I definately need sone studio shots, as locations are not great for my hair lol its was quite windy and ny hair just knots and gets tangled, didn't realise it looked so bad though lol :/ and yeah I know what u mean, I didn't have anywhere to sort makeup out etc just a quick going over with sone bronzer lol Thanks - you too x |
15 August 2012 11:14 |
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| andybramahphotograph Photographer | The main shot needs cropping tighter to make that great big sculpture less distracting as its very dominating. | |
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| 15 August 2012 12:32 |
| kayleigh90x Model Location United Kingdom Derbyshire | Okay thanks x |
16 August 2012 02:00 |
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| CharlotteMaddison Photographer This member has been reset to pending | Hi I don't think you look all that comfortable / happy. I like the photography; but the outfit feels out of place. I do like the image every one has pointed out. Honestly; if you come and work with me you will be very comfortable and I will ensure you get some expression / connection with the camera, Char x |
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