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 | 11 August 2012 05:58 |
| tob Photographer  Location Europe Germany Hamburg | I like this one in particular  Regardless your good eye as a photographer I hope you'll keep modeling as well.  |
| 11 August 2012 06:44 |
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| Hugh Photographer  Location United Kingdom Dyfed Aberystwyth | They are good. A nice stylish set. It would have been easier to do a detailed crit if you had numbered them, but in general: a few of the early ones would benefit from cropping and better framing:  crop out the lampshade, add in the feet, and it'd be great. Lens flare... I'm almost certain you're adding it in PS - please tell me if I'm wrong. It's not easy to do convincingly. The light direction is wrong for inducing flare:  |
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11 August 2012 07:05 |
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| allegra Model |  Quote from HughThey are good. A nice stylish set. It would have been easier to do a detailed crit if you had numbered them, but in general: a few of the early ones would benefit from cropping and better framing: crop out the lampshade, add in the feet, and it'd be great. Lens flare... I'm almost certain you're adding it in PS - please tell me if I'm wrong. It's not easy to do convincingly. The light direction is wrong for inducing flare: Thank you Hugh! Very much appreciated. As for Photoshop, I have no idea how to work it (it's in my plans to learn) and none of the photos were put through PS. I intended the flare effect to be more like a haze rather than something that is coming from a light source (although I do like it when it looks like that's what it is too!). I just like the effect that it gives, but will consciously work on having photos that don't have it in! Thanks again everyone! |
| 11 August 2012 07:16 |
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| Hugh Photographer Location United Kingdom Dyfed Aberystwyth | flare is a lovely effect - just use sparingly! Check out David Hamilton for a master at using it. |
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  | 20 August 2012 15:59 |
| acroshaw Photographer  Location United Kingdom Hampshire Southampton | ah damn more competition, and very good at that! terrific shots and I think you could teach a few togs a thing or two |
 | 20 August 2012 17:43 |
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| jadestiff1991 Model  Location United Kingdom Suffolk stowmarket | i think its an amazing attempt! only 1 thing.. you cut the model out a bit in a couple of shots and have alot of the surrounding.. just need to get the whole model in.. its wierd i just say it how my agent does but it makes you want to see more of the model.. but other than that i think they are fantastic!! very creative and well lit with the natural light! good work x | |
| If you cant change the direction of the wind - adjust your sails. | ||
| 20 August 2012 18:05 |
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| gerda_babbii Model  Location United Kingdom Norfolk Kings Lynn | excellent i agree i like the same image as diabolik love the softness and light all good stuff and good luck cant wait to see your images after a year or so, will be amazing at this rate  x |
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| 20 August 2012 19:59 |
| Jack_Russell Photographer  Location United Kingdom West Midlands Burntwood | it would be so easy to give condemning critiques of each and every image... but art is subjective by it's very nature. Whilst there are some aspects that would irk me, overall its a good, creative, foundation to start from... agree with some of the other comments, less can sometimes be more. |
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