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 | 12 July 2012 06:09 |
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| alshepherd Model  Location United Kingdom East Sussex crowborough | What would you suggest to improve my port? | |
| See my full portfolio at http://anniesnow.wix.com/official | ||
| 12 July 2012 06:09 |
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| alshepherd Model Location United Kingdom East Sussex crowborough | What would you suggest to improve my port? | |
| See my full portfolio at http://anniesnow.wix.com/official | ||
12 July 2012 06:28 |
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| mgphotomedia Photographer | I wouldn't look past the caution tape on your avatar.  |
 | 12 July 2012 06:42 |
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| RedChecker Photographer  Location United Kingdom Buckinghamshire Stoke Mandeville | Harsh | |
| If you can't dazzle 'em with brilliance, baffle 'em with bullshit | ||
12 July 2012 07:02 |
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| mgphotomedia Photographer |  Quote from RedCheckerHarsh Possibly. But first impressions count and rightly or wrongly I've categorised the OP as a model I wouldn't choose to work with based on that image alone. I guess that's harsh, yes. But I'm also sure that the OP will realise that all photographers aren't the same and that plenty of others will have a gander at her port and offer her valuable advice and maybe even some paid work.  |
| 12 July 2012 07:05 |
| Marty_W Photographer  Location United Kingdom Suffolk | More images with your hands away from you hair. |
 | 12 July 2012 07:23 |
| inspired Photographer  Location United Kingdom Surrey Shepperton | I'd spend a couple of hours browsing photographers in your general area and see if you can find someone who has some good work on their ports and beg them for tf or pay for some decent images, then practise practise practise those expressions and poses in a mirror........simple |
| 12 July 2012 11:42 |
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| alshepherd Model  Location United Kingdom East Sussex crowborough | Quote from Marty_W More images with your hands away from you hair. Woopsie, I've only just realised how much I do that! And thankyou for the advice, don't care if it's harsh, if its helpful I'll take it x |
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| 12 July 2012 11:49 |
| profilepictures Photographer  Location United Kingdom Suffolk Bury St Edmunds | I think you might just spend some time looking at the really great models and photograqphers work here and considering how you feel about whaqt you've done so far. For me, and I don't mind sounding a bit dismissive. The cautio tape shot was dead in the water befor ethe shutter was presseed, its a cheesy lazy thinking concept poorly executed. Theres another picture with a bit of cable hanging down to the right odf screen. far from pointing at the camera operater, I think its your decision what you show of photo's revieved. I've taken some proper howlers in my time, but I wouldnt display them her, and I think the taste of the model is displayed equally in the choice of what she uses as her portfolio pieces. I guess we all struggle with this kind of point sometimes because tis considered rude to crit the other half of phot collaboration without their invitation. But still, if the cap fits? Hope that makes sense, it's intended as a point for consideration rather than a dig. |
 | 12 July 2012 11:58 |
| extra_mayo Photographer  Location United Kingdom Kent Gillingham | A decent clear head shot is needed. Ian |
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