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 Location United Kingdom Clwyd denbigh | heloooooo ...  righto .. i would very much appreciate ur opinions , this is the 1st port review i have put up for since goin full nude .. could i have your thoughts please ... i have some FAB shoots coming up .. gona try and nail this and blow my port out of the park , headshots , some sexy erotica and some more styled and thought out shots shall be added .. ... i know i am lacking headshots .. they scare the living day light out of me .. but i promise i will get some good uns soon .. and fasion ... but as im sure you can gather im not one for fasion ...  but is there anything else you would like to see from me ???? , i know where i am heading .. just want to see if you agree  thank you every one xxx |
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 4:34 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Hertfordshire | errrrrr.....*adds Rachael to list of reasons to visit Wales*... I'd like to see a bit more location work in your portfolio (I know - rich coming from me who has practically none :) - something out of the studio, maybe some stuff with a bit more of an interesting background - you certainly have the figure to remain the centre of attention regardless of the background so I think you could really go to town on that front. I like the Adam Robertson shots the best as a group. I like the jac49 glamour shot (with the webbing) too. Hope that helps Alex. |
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 4:39 PM | |||
Location United Kingdom Clwyd denbigh | thanks alex , that does help ...  i have some fab ideas .. hoping to be done with by the end of the month that should add a real wow factor .. location baby !!! xxxx |
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 4:41 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom London Enfield | Think you got a good port there  , not least helped by Mr Robertson. Suggestions? Would like to see some more non-studio settings. I know the last pic of you are Sarah is in a toilet, but I got drawn to that one as it was more interesting as it wasnt a plain background. Think you have good pins too so make more use of them (i.e. more full length shots). Dont be afraid to cover up a bit more, not fashion, but suggestive rather than full on glamour. Think you are lacking in some WOW lingerie shots. Try some in a non glamour way. |
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 4:46 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Merseyside | You look great and I'll definitely work with you soon (please) 'cos you're not too far away. It's be fun getting some good headshots with you but, I'm sure everyone means to do portraits and somehow get distracted...'can't think why. Yes you're pics are great in that they're generally well exposed and show you in a good light. As you recognise yourself there could be a bit more of a wow factor but that doesn't stop me really liking them. |
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 4:53 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Strathclyde North Ayrshire/Glasgow | Really nice portfolio, it does what a portfolio should. it sells you as a hard working, serious model, and will make people want to work with you, You have a good range of high quality images there, Just one point reading through your notes there are quite a few spelling mistakes, run a spellchecker over it. it will take a few minutes but will make your portfolio just that bit more professional Good work though. Allan |
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 4:54 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Clwyd denbigh |  Quote from zimmy0You look great and I'll definitely work with you soon (please) 'cos you're not too far away. It's be fun getting some good headshots with you but, I'm sure everyone means to do portraits and somehow get distracted...'can't think why. Yes you're pics are great in that they're generally well exposed and show you in a good light. As you recognise yourself there could be a bit more of a wow factor but that doesn't stop me really liking them. yeh thats so true i always start out a shoot thinking right some nice head shots and before you know it my boobs have fallen out and iv set the tone of the shoot  haha .. but i will certainly control myself and get it done soon ..... wow factor is needed .. i have some amazing ideas which i will be putting into action very soon .. realy gona kick this up the ass and take my port up a peg or 2 and i agree ray ... some suggestive rather than in your face shots would also be beneficial ... thank you guys for your comments and feedback , much appreciated and a big help ... 
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 4:55 PM | |||
Location United Kingdom Clwyd denbigh | Quote from Twentytwentyimage Really nice portfolio, it does what a portfolio should. it sells you as a hard working, serious model, and will make people want to work with you, You have a good range of high quality images there, Just one point reading through your notes there are quite a few spelling mistakes, run a spellchecker over it. it will take a few minutes but will make your portfolio just that bit more professional Good work though. Allan haha thanks alan will do ... im acually the worlds worst typer lolol.. il do that now xxxxxx |
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 9:52 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Devon Plymouth | Quote from rach85 i have some fab ideas .. hoping to be done with by the end of the month that should add a real wow factor .. location baby !!! xxxx yep yep, book those tickets!! Ok I'm sure you're gonna moan at me, but you know that I don't do grey (black and white only!) I personally think that some of your older work was better, the edgy, almost fetish-like location work. You seriously should not have sold those boots! Your main image, I like, but I swear Adam has been having a play with photoshop as your boobs are not that big! Your other images are a better representation of what you truly look like, so therefore i do prefer them over your current main picture. I think showing a greater range would benefit you. We all know you have an incredible body, but that doesn't mean you need to be naked for every shoot you do. You have the height and look to pull off a wider range of modelling than "tits out" style, and I'd like to see you explore it a bit more (even though that may not be where the immediate money is). Some artistic nude and fashion work in your portfolio would serve you well I think, as well as the pretty headshot I'm sure you can manage ;o) Anyway, no abusive texts please, I'm going to bed.... |
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 1:31 AM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Kent Chatham | Rach Very good. If you were local I would have no hesitation in booking you. You have a variety of shots here. Maybe some more art nude shots would be nice. You do have a look which is suited to "glamour" and most of your portfolio covers this. The 2nd fashion shot against the wallpaper could be replaced with a better picture, maybe one of you in a classy designer dress. Peter  |
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