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| Tuesday, November 03, 2009 7:28 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Lancashire preston | Did some artnude with karen yesterday this the first processed what u think im totally out of my comfort zone with this... |
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| Tuesday, November 03, 2009 7:41 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom West Sussex Gatwick | ... not sure about this one Adam. On my screen it looks extremely contrasty with burnt out highlights and absolute-black shadows. I can see what you're trying to achieve but think your lighting might benefit from being a bit more subtle. Hope this helps. Si |
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| if a man speaks in the forest and there's no woman there to hear him, is he still wrong ...? | |||
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| Tuesday, November 03, 2009 7:43 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Cornwall Liskeard | Good first attempt but not keen on the lighting, a little harsh maybe and the fingrs and hands look awkward Keep practising though, we all started somewhere. 
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| Everone has a photographic memory, just some don't have film in!!! | |||
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| Tuesday, November 03, 2009 7:46 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Devon Plymouth | Lighting needs to be a lot softer with some more of the body lit really. Some light on the face other than just the tip of her nose would be good as well :o) | ||
| The man who smiles when things go wrong has already thought of someone to blame it on... | |||
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| Wednesday, November 04, 2009 3:01 AM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Warwickshire Rugby | The light on the right was that a smallish softbox? I think it could have worked alot better if it wasn't pushed back around her so much. Think it needs to come forward more and spill onto her face and chest more. Think you need to bring out the jaw line more along with other parts. The rim light is very harsh Adam. The lighting also makes her boobs look different sizes plus the lower fingers on her stomach look a little creepy. |
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